This was a very well written essay. I loved it when you said that you wanted to open other people's eyes to let them see because that is so true. I like the way you explained in such detail. Good Job!
I liked that you were able to make people think about how they would feel if they knew that they were constantly being judged by others. You're right, we shouldn't judge others.
Your essay was very well written and I can personally connect to it. Being judged by others isn't a fun experience and you provided good reasons why a person shouldn't be judged at first glance or by rumors. Overall, you essay was really good.