I've accomplished almost the same thing that you have accomplished.
Fishing is a great sport. If you manage to catch even one fish it is a huge accomplishment.
that's cool how the smallest things can make you happy like fishing
I have a way to connect to your essay because im on the competitive fishing team. My connection is that at my last tournament I was all down because all the other kids on my team were catching stuff except my boat. We had 45 minutes to go and still hadn't caught anything. I stop my self an talk to my self on the inside and said you can do it just concentrate and don't worry about any thing else. What do you know it, it worked the same exact cast after I said that to my self I caught a bass. My day went from me being all down to excited.
Your essay is structured nicely. The message is loud and clear. My mom would tell you that life will be easier for you if you think the way you do. Good job.
Accomplishing something makes me fee good inside my mind