I really connected to your story because I also believe in the same thing. I also love to play football!
Wow. This is really a powerful essay! I love how you mentioned that there is no diversity on the field. That was a great way of stating it. I can tell that that is the place where you feel safe, and are able to be you. Not everyone can find that place, and it's awesome that you did.
I really liked your essay because I believe that you are right and I also play football!
This essay just hit me like a train. Talking about discrimination and how they're like a brotherhood in a sense really had its impact.
This essay was great, I don't play football but I think you sort of put yourself out there with this essay which is great!
I really liked how you thought that everybody on the field has the same goal and that goal is to win.