I really like your beginning and your first paragraph good job
I can relate to that also but with a guy of course not a girl.
That was a really good story, the way you explained hope in several different ways could really inspire lots of people. I liked how you kept trying and how you had emotion swings that had to deal with the weather.
I loved your beginning :)
''Never doubt anyone’s emotions, or mess with someone’s emotions.'' Was a great quote.
Your first paragraph was so good, and I liked how you said something like this keep you head held high even though your having a bad day! I sometimes think of that too.
This is such a well written piece! Hope is something to have for the long run, because it will never leave you, as long as you don't leave it! Your story helped explain how something good will be waiting just around the corner, good job :)
Your beginning was great and you had a great quote
Its good that you kept your head up and kept pressing on.