Hi. I absolutely loved your essay. I could relate because I consider my close friends "extended family". Your essay must have took a lot of courage to write. You gave a lot of detail. You did an amazing job.
I really liked your essay because I could tell u tried to put a lot of feeling in it and I loved your ending on how u two became closer as friend.
This was great. You really conveyed more emotion than I think a lot of people see. And I agree, extended family is very important.
I really liked the quote you put in your introduction.
Your beginning was powerful and it can mean a lot to some people.
I really enjoyed your essay and how you got very personal into it. It takes a lot of courage to write about a topic like this. I think this essay was very powerful. Great job!
Your essay was strong the quote in the being was great!
your topic was very strong and powerful. nice job!
Its cool that you think family isn't someone you are related to.