your essay was interesting to read. I kinda could relate to looking up on the wall and looking back to all the memories. I like how you used different vocabulary.
I liked your essay a lot. it was cool how you talked about your memories of those things you kept.
Lovely message :) I do remember when I went on a website and sent myself a future text. I will be receiving it on my 20th birthday. So excited! I totally agree with you that the little things in life mean something and sometimes, everything. I have a story of my own too. And when you have a bad day again, remember to smell the roses ; )
I have similar items like you do except mine is in a small compartment room. I like how you use your vocabulary and your sentence structure. I can read it in a flowing rhythm.
I really liked how you gave certain examples to really explain and show your belief.
I like it. It was very unique, and it brought back a memory of mine, actually.
nice it has a good meaning
okay first of all you are an amazing writer and it lets me visualize everything and I really think you could grow up and be a writer. I love this essay.
I liked your belief it was kind of similar to mine
That's a really neat idea to write yourself a letter
good story. i can relate because every time i clean my room i find random things that i have memories on. and then ill sometimes show it to my brother and we'll just laugh about it
I really liked how you linked your memories from the past, and explained how it formed you in the future. It was very deep.