That's a really good story to go with your belief
I like your essay because it is true, sharing is a big thing.
I also wrote my essay on charity and giving to others and I really loved your essay and beliefs.
Mattie, I love your story!!! sharing is caring just like how you give me the chocolate chip girl scout cookies in social studies.. haha! But I really did like how you put a real life experience in your story and how much personal effort you put into helping others!! I still remember when you were telling about the amazing experience in Haiti.. ILY!! <3