That was such a beautiful essay. I know its hard to lose a loved one. Your little sister is in a better place and I'm praying for you!
this is beautiful and I know how bad it is
I love your essay. I know that it must have been hard to lose your little sister and I am sorry for your loss.
I loved your essay. It was very detailed and had a lot of emotion. I'm sorry for your lost and hope the best for you.
This was so put together, but so much pain reading it. I understand your pain, honestly. I lost my great grandmother when I was in 5th grade and I still think about her everyday. It'll only get better though. You'll realize that it happened for a reason and maybe you won't know this for a while but, you will eventually. I believe in your belief though.
I really loved your esay. The main point of this essay was very touching and i really enjoyed reading about your story. I liked how ysou howed your emotion about your experience though the essay. It makes you feel that you shouldn't take things for granted and you taught a great lesson of that.
I really liked your essay. The purpose of this was clear and it can teach us all a lesson. I am so sorry for what you went through, but I promise something good will come out of it.
Your essay was so sweet. I lost my best friend in February and it was hard but you move on with time. Its hard but you learn to go on and it makes you stronger.
your essay had so much emotion, it teaches us a very important lesson and I'm so sorry for your loss
This was such a beautiful essay. It was very moving and i really enjoyed reading it. I am so sorry for all that you had to go through, but something good will come of it. This was a wonderful essay! thanks for sharing it.
im loving this story
This was a great writing, and you were very clear on your belief. Not many people experience something like this at a young age, and the people that have, I find there is always something to learn from them. Im sorry that something so tragic had to happen for you to come to a realization of not taking things for granted, but everything happens for a reason
great essay it really taught me something your sister is in a better place
I really really like your essay and the message it spreads! I'm also very sorry about the loss of your little baby sister! I hope everything gets better for you!
I loved reading your essay and I know how you feel. I've taken so many things for granted and then, I lost the things and I realize how much those things mattered to me. I can't imagine the death of my own little sister... :'( I'm praying for you and I hope things have gotten a lot better for you. Remember to smell the roses : )
great essay. I take things for granted all the time but I have no Idea what its like to lose a sibling. im sorry for your loss
This is a beautiful essay. I am very sorry for your loss.
where to start....first of all you have a beautiful way of writing. and I completely agree that you should never take things for granted, in fact that's what I wrote my paper about. I have no idea what you personally went through but I have an idea. I lost my brother when I was 8 so just know your not alone. im praying for you and your family
I still remember the day when you came to me and told me about hope :( even though she wasn't my baby sister, I still feel pain from it. I hated seeing you cry that much at school. It was the worst feeling ever seeing you cry. You are such a strong person. you have over came so much the past 3 years. Ilysm hay <3
I am very sorry for your lose and I am always here for you.
I really liked the last sentence.
I know it's not the same but I lost a best friend and I know how it feels to live without someone why means so much to you
This essay is so touching. I have no siblings myself, but I know how it feels to lose someone close to you. This is an amazing essay and is beautifully written. Great job!
I love you Haley. Im always here for you. and this story is beautiful. Hope will always be your little angel and is here for you just like all your friends<3
Haley I love you so much! I don't know where I'd be without my L.A. Buddy! Just keep staying strong, and I'll be there whenever you need me!
Haley I loved this essay! Its better than anything i've ever read. I happy that you were able to share that because i know how hard it must have been. Thank you for posting something beautiful.