That was great Taylor!! I have that same free falling feeling after a practice run or a big race!
I really liked how you used your determination to keep you going in swimming!
I believe success only comes to people who work hard and never give up. It's because by doing so, you learn from your mistakes and get to know more about what kind of person you are inside. Working hard will make a difference. I guarantee that :)
When im determined to do something i keep that same mind to do it, until i actually complete it or start doing it.
I liked how you described a free fall