Believe in That Pogo Stick

5/6/2014

Madison W

5/8/2014 01:02:59 am

Your essay was great! It really stood out to me because it was very different (but in a good way). I wouldn't think to write about something like that but it was really good!

Mrs. B

5/8/2014 02:33:44 am

I really like your voice throughout the essay - I could hear the goat-like laugh and your closing remarks made me chuckle. Very sassy :)

Carly W.

5/9/2014 01:24:24 am

How you made it sound like a real radio broadcast, "So this is Zoie Vanderbush signing off, stay sassy America." I loved that! :)

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