I really like the way you described your cheer.
I really liked your essay because I was able to connect to it. Although I am not in cheer, I am in band. I have always wanted to be in band. Most people don't consider it a very hardworking sport. Overall, a great essay with a great story.
I really enjoyed reading your essay mostly because I can relate because I do cheer here at Mattawan too but also because you showed how you did not give up and pushed through the tough parts and now it really pays off.
I really liked your essay because I could relate to it. I don't do cheer but, I still respect cheer as a sport. I can tell it takes hard work and courage to do it. Most things do take hard work. Never stop working towards your goal no matter what other people think about cheer, its your life do what makes you happy.
I liked how you kept going, even though cheer was tough for you
I liked how you shared your story from the hospital. That you are determined to work hard. Good luck