I thought your story was deep and showed what friendship meant!
I thought that your story about other people that you had never talked to helped you meant they really cared and showed that you meant something to them. Overall, this was a great story. Thanks Luna.
I loved your essay! That would be really scary. I'm glad those people yelled to the safety guy to stop.
Your essay showed that sometimes bad situations can lead to good friendships. You did a really grew job showing that.
I thought it was really cool and amazing how you and those two girls became best friends(:
I liked how the tile of your essay really tied in with the meaning of your story.