My Beginning

5/7/2014

braden

5/8/2014 09:51:58 pm

you had really good detail it keeps the readers interested good job.

Payton W

5/9/2014 12:30:29 am

I loved the quote you used to start off you essay.

Reilly

5/9/2014 01:23:36 am

I liked the quote you used at the beginning.

Taylor H

5/9/2014 03:48:35 am

This essay was really good, it was really deep which made it interesting to read. Great job!

Chris

5/9/2014 03:50:45 am

I really like how much detail you put in your story

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