Hey There I really liked your essay. You had great detail. I also thought it was cool how you used Hakuna Matata at the end. Good Job.
I really liked how you said forgiving and then forgetting, it really made me think about how i need to do that and not let people get to me
I loved you reference of god because a lot of people can relate to that and think personally.
Everybody usually has a different view on a conflict or something else. But just seeing yours, (the whole forgiving or forgetting policy) it is just different, and not in a bad way either.
I feel like your story can really relate to a bunch of people because we are at the stage at our lives were we think everything matters so much. Even when something's don't. We hold grudges to make each other feel bad, but honestly we shouldn't. I've gotten in arguments with my best friends all the time in 6th and 7th grade, but this year I've realized that those arguements don't get you no where so I can really relate to your story.
I know how you feel because I had a grudge on someone but I forgave them because he is my best friend and your story will have me to remember to Forgive and Forget.
I really enjoyed this story. It was a great way of telling how you feel and it is a great belief in life.
I liked your essay because its true some people do say sorry and don't mean it or they do i really understand. This actually made a lot of sense to me.
I love how what you believe in can relate to SO many people. Everyone has a point in their life were they get into some kind of argument or fight with a friend (or anybody) and come out of it hurt. This essay really opened my eyes to see the importance of not only forgiving, but forgetting about it as well!
I really like your perspective. I understand what you felt and it is hard to forgive
Very well worded. This is something that I think everyone needs a little reminder of and you did a good job of presenting this issue. But I also have a question. What did you mean when you wrote, "Lent ended, inside me"? I was really confused about that.
Lent is that holiday where you give up something for forty days in honor of Jesus. I gave up a lot of stuff. and the "inside of me" part meant I had to keep all those things inside of me. : )
I think that the message you tried to get across was very good, that retaliating doesnt always fix the problem
This essay really relates to my life. It's such a good reminder to everyone about forgiving. It was written really well.
teaches a great lesson, great job writing it
I think your essay was really relatable, no matter what the age, because these kinds of problems happen at every age. I know through out this year this has happened to me and it was really hard but I forgave them to, and it did make is so much better.
I think this has a great life lesson. Your piece had a really good message.
I loved you story because I had a connection, My dad always tells me to Forgive and forget. Nice job!!
I really liked this story. I can relate to it also. this essay was written well!!
I loved the detail in your essay, it was very specific.
I liked your essay, it had a lot of good description!
Forgiving and forgetting is a quality that a lot of people don't have, you are very fortunate to have it.