That was amazing!! It was all so descriptive. I love how you mentioned the smell of jasmine by your house, and how it all has a calming effect. I could almost smell it myself. I also like how you mentioned that you believe that spring is one of God's greatest creations. I loved hearing that because, it made me realize that I believe that too!! You are an amazing writer.
I thought this was written beautifully! The way you described the nature it was so relaxing, and reminded me of myself sitting in my backyard. My favorite thing was the part where you explained the fresh cut grass that reminded you of where you were from, I thought that was really cool!
This was an amazing essay! I really loved how you said the trees greeted you like an old friend, but you were just there yesterday. Your description and smilies throughout the whole essay was great! I was hooked from the start.